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Post by singerofsongs on Aug 16, 2020 7:35:36 GMT
Embracing cartesian principle Metaphor awaken, vision sought
I dreamt of a diamond desert Through which leviathans languish Some passing eternity lapses Scoops a fistful o shards savagely
Crushed to a form A mortal instrument Given breath, ego Tumbled gracelessly down A mere ripple breaking the surface of our little wishing well of time This dear tipple slaking the God’s lust, creation; a spell, a dime
Time in essence is surely not a line? Our conscious perception appears to move forward Think instead of an ocean of thought and perception A well of osmosis, ripples refracting off each little platonic cave, echoing beyond
As our divine prisms drift downwards, a line may be drawn Our entry and eventual rest, cessation of momentum by the ocean bed Yet our dreams, be they night or day, our hopes fears aspirations, nay, our very souls’ cries of song echoing
May they not rise above this vista? Find a lonely island on which to dwell? From whence to gaze avidly down upon the sea of thought, glimpsing memory, tempting prophecy? Sensing through the swirling mists o waves other rippling echoes?
Potential fires and floods in six dimensions, what may yet to come or may never Be felt in this particular niche of time? Perhaps our Siamese twins of conception merge above the waters, sharing thoughts with our selves in alternate reality?
Yet these diamonds from which our souls are wrought... Be they naught but shards of Gaia? Mother Earth herself, the one eternal conscience of our little niche? From whence we all have come, to whom we all must return?
Perhaps certain egos burn so bright as to hold together essence, fling forever récurrence unto the well.
Let your wish ripple
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Post by Elizabeth on Aug 16, 2020 7:43:10 GMT
Wow. Did you write this yourself? It's great though and I think it captured thought and perception well to compare it to an ocean.
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Post by singerofsongs on Aug 16, 2020 7:56:12 GMT
I did, though I would hardly claim original thought (does such a thing exist?) I may refine the splurge to composed poetry at some point, as it is now I couldn’t sleep and felt the need to share
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Post by Elizabeth on Aug 16, 2020 20:22:30 GMT
I did, though I would hardly claim original thought (does such a thing exist?) I may refine the splurge to composed poetry at some point, as it is now I couldn’t sleep and felt the need to share You should definitely do that! Also, it's saying you're posting via mobile. If you want to have access to all things on the forum then scroll down to the bottom of the page and click desktop at the right. The mobile version is limited in access.
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Post by singerofsongs on Aug 17, 2020 10:23:38 GMT
Thanks! That, I was not aware of. I don’t have my pc right now, shall be sure to borrow a laptop in future however - or can I accès the full site from mobile?
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Post by Eugene 2.0 on Aug 22, 2020 11:37:16 GMT
Thanks! That, I was not aware of. I don’t have my pc right now, shall be sure to borrow a laptop in future however - or can I accès the full site from mobile? Yes, it's possible. The site has a mobile mode too, however it lacks of some options that the pc shell has.
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