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Post by warriors4 on Sept 21, 2019 7:48:18 GMT
Thru life we feel we see we heal
From birth to death and all between
We search for answers for our purpose
Our existence
We look to the past to see our future
And look to the future to explain
Our past
Our curiosity compels it's our drive
It quenches our thirst for knowledge
And in turn feeds our passion
Our passion for our reason
Our reason for being
For living
For breathing.
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Post by Elizabeth on Sept 21, 2019 16:24:17 GMT
That was a very truthful and realistic poem and well written. Did you write it yourself warriors4?
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Post by warriors4 on Sept 28, 2019 14:54:40 GMT
Thank you and yes I have hundreds of poems from all aspects of life even comedic it's one of very few things in life I dont struggle with I enjoy writing them I've still got some written from when I was a teenager my poems as myself have evolved over time and I really appreciate the compliment thank you
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Post by Elizabeth on Sept 29, 2019 3:32:52 GMT
Thank you and yes I have hundreds of poems from all aspects of life even comedic it's one of very few things in life I dont struggle with I enjoy writing them I've still got some written from when I was a teenager my poems as myself have evolved over time and I really appreciate the compliment thank you I like poetry as well and write some myself so it's always nice seeing members here posting things they've written. So feel free to share poetry whenever you want or just discuss things you're into  |
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Post by warriors4 on Sept 29, 2019 5:29:29 GMT
Thank you and much appreciated. As you can probably tell from my posts over religion. once I get into a discussion I kinda waffle on a bit.i would love to read something that you have written.with the style and the way someone writes a poem. You can understand that person. Because poetry is written from personal emotions and experience it's like an emotional signature of that person imprinted on paper
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Post by Eugene 2.0 on Sept 29, 2019 18:15:13 GMT
I like this very nicely poem.
Also I liked that "ours" and "we", and "for" few times among the lines. Seems like "we" need to group or to cooperate, or to unite, or to be strong before The Night.
An interesting sets of words like "life", "existence", "future", "being", and similar. They add some notification feeling, I mean that feeling that you accept it inside your body every time as, for example, being a cop you need to decide to take or not to take a bribe.
Rhythmically it's a 2/4 pattern with some melodic thread that goes through it...
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Post by thesageofmainstreet on Sept 29, 2019 19:20:46 GMT
Thank you and yes I have hundreds of poems from all aspects of life even comedic it's one of very few things in life I dont struggle with I enjoy writing them I've still got some written from when I was a teenager my poems as myself have evolved over time and I really appreciate the compliment thank you I like haiku, and can do one on the spur of the moment. Do you like that form? Japanese on dates Fumble over syllables. Poets don't get laid Or, as a mock answer to why Koreans don't buy much air-conditioning: Breeze on neck. Brr! Brr! Wife-san sniffs. Perfume not hers. Husband-san feels knife |
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Post by Elizabeth on Sept 29, 2019 20:40:49 GMT
Thank you and yes I have hundreds of poems from all aspects of life even comedic it's one of very few things in life I dont struggle with I enjoy writing them I've still got some written from when I was a teenager my poems as myself have evolved over time and I really appreciate the compliment thank you I like haiku, and can do one on the spur of the moment. Do you like that form? Japanese on dates Fumble over syllables. Poets don't get laid Or, as a mock answer to why Koreans don't buy much air-conditioning: Breeze on neck. Brr! Brr! Wife-san sniffs. Perfume not hers. Husband-san feels knife Do haikus ever make sense though? They just seem like a bunch of words jumbled together to make a sentence. Free verse and haikus were my worst. Rhyming poems were the only thing that made sense for me. |
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Post by warriors4 on Sept 30, 2019 1:27:17 GMT
Yes I can do different styles the poems I write on post are made up there and then I have had two poems published in a book i also sent one of to a record company styled in a song just to get some feedback i got very positive feedback the only problem is when i freestyle so to speak as in go on the forum or site and just start writing what ever pops into my head i never remember what it is what I've written
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