Pasithea
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Post by Pasithea on Jan 1, 2018 2:37:55 GMT
Surfacing I look at its roads of veins and arteries. It flows like woes with heartbeats. It never sees light living airtight. Everything seems right. Who’d think of plight? Hurt is a knife that cuts a skin letting blood ooze. Air burns its surface water deepens its gaps. Suddenly an iris once so clear gets washed with tears. Only then we realize clarity comes from tears. Suddenly light tears confidence with real fears. Tears are fierce teachers sharper than spears. Wounds are lights let in by reality’s shears clearing destiny’s ways in lessons about other beings. Author's Notes: Inspired by: “The wound is the place where the Light enters you.”-Rumi Attachments:
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Post by Elizabeth on Jan 1, 2018 3:09:14 GMT
Sounds like it's written by someone who has gone through a lot of suffering. Does this poem help you stay strong knowing everyone has such times?
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Post by Deleted on Jan 1, 2018 3:42:10 GMT
Sounds like it's written by someone who has gone through a lot of suffering. Does this poem help you stay strong knowing everyone has such times? Rumi was a Sufi mystic. |
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Post by Elizabeth on Jan 1, 2018 4:18:46 GMT
Sounds like it's written by someone who has gone through a lot of suffering. Does this poem help you stay strong knowing everyone has such times? Rumi was a Sufi mystic. You know more than me on Rumi!  I just know the user pretty good. |
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Post by dollovanpatterson on Jan 2, 2018 5:08:19 GMT
That's deep
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Post by Deleted on Jan 11, 2018 13:04:04 GMT
These lines are really sharp by its beauty and sharm!
A genius, talented poem!
'Teachers sharper than spears' - is most truly line.
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Pasithea
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Post by Pasithea on Jan 15, 2018 1:29:24 GMT
Sounds like it's written by someone who has gone through a lot of suffering. Does this poem help you stay strong knowing everyone has such times? Rumi was a Sufi mystic. In some way, part of what you said is true- experience wise - but the reason I wrote this was out of my love for Rumi and his outlook on life's trials. |
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Pasithea
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Post by Pasithea on Jan 15, 2018 1:31:38 GMT
These lines are really sharp by its beauty and sharm! A genius, talented poem! 'Teachers sharper than spears' - is most truly line. thank you my friend. |
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I just know the user pretty good. 
