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May 11, 2018 22:44:43 GMT
Post by Deleted on May 11, 2018 22:44:43 GMT
Heaven and hell don't really exist that's what I believe, they're just words to describe something that we can't perceive,
we get told we'll get punished if we misbehave but rewarded if we're good when we reach our grave.
They try and scare us, try and keep us in check, like cheating at poker skimming of the deck,
words mean nothing, but we all believe, and that's how they all deceive.
We get told our history never questioning at all, while the ones at the top watch us crumble and fall.
THERE IS MORE TO LIFE THAN WE HAVE BEEN TOLD BUT MOST OF US BELIEVE THE LIES WE HAVE BEEN SOLD
the secrets inside us, the truth is there, we're so much more than skin and hair.
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May 11, 2018 22:47:25 GMT
Post by Διαμονδ on May 11, 2018 22:47:25 GMT
who is author?
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Post by Deleted on May 11, 2018 22:53:20 GMT
my thoughts
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Post by Διαμονδ on May 11, 2018 23:02:58 GMT
WoW already became a poet!
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Post by Elizabeth on May 11, 2018 23:20:54 GMT
Written well. This would be a free verse poem. The ones I suck at. Thanks for mastering it like a champ and saddening me more since I can't do it. My poems only rhyme that's it But yeah I do hope you're not deceived
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May 12, 2018 14:38:54 GMT
Post by Deleted on May 12, 2018 14:38:54 GMT
An interesting poem and thoughts. It reminds me proclamations at the barricades. The poem has great spiritual power.
Below I wrote some silly lines, just for lols.
Kindly people down, kindly people crown Friendly people would be living in some kind of wood Tender people mood, Tender people good Ugly people eat the eagle roasted to the root Moody people pawns, moody people clowns Strange people seeing triggers hide their heads with hood Married people star, married people war Funny people pick some jingles playing silly loop
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May 15, 2018 8:05:24 GMT
Post by Deleted on May 15, 2018 8:05:24 GMT
Written well. This would be a free verse poem. The ones I suck at. Thanks for mastering it like a champ and saddening me more since I can't do it. My poems only rhyme that's it But yeah I do hope you're not deceived oh trust me . i am so glad and enlightened to be deceived in such a way . Got ton of sensible corroborating evidence My first ex was a walking dictionary and she use to make lot of poems , she even made poem on me showcasing the love .
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Aug 16, 2018 19:30:47 GMT
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Post by Deleted on Aug 16, 2018 19:30:47 GMT
Not exactly a poem but here it is.
Without rage or defiance, even without unbecoming mirth. Look deep into the tangled mysteries of things.
Refuse credence to the absurd and allegiance to the arrogant authority.
Sufficiently conscious of fallibility to be tolerant of all opinions.
With a faith too wide for a doctrine and a benevolence untrammeled by creed
Too wise to by wholly poets and yet to surely poets to be implacably wise.
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Aug 18, 2018 0:17:25 GMT
Post by Elizabeth on Aug 18, 2018 0:17:25 GMT
unknown you're making me feel all bad now. I just realized that I write poetry but haven't written a religious one yet. And you have! Not fair Sad
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Post by Deleted on Aug 18, 2018 4:30:34 GMT
unknown you're making me feel all bad now. I just realized that I write poetry but haven't written a religious one yet. And you have! Not fair aww hugs !! but this isnt my work , so we both gotta write new poems
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