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Post by Διαμονδ on Feb 5, 2018 18:53:19 GMT
Has anyone here written poetry in Japanese Haiku style? I wrote several in this style. Maybe in the style of pseudo-Haiku! Funny evening, the Queen of fish is preparing for bed. She's never alone here!
P.S I hope everyone understands who it she ! xD ))
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Post by Deleted on Feb 5, 2018 18:59:26 GMT
He was a normal man. Words were really cruel! They cried at her grave now.
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Post by Διαμονδ on Feb 5, 2018 19:26:27 GMT
Он был нормальным человеком. Слова были действительно жестокими! Теперь они кричали на ее могилу. WoW
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Post by Deleted on Feb 5, 2018 19:50:41 GMT
Он был нормальным человеком. Слова были действительно жестокими! Теперь они кричали на ее могилу. In the #2 line I can rephrase to: 'her words were so cruel'... I think this additions will come in handy. But my Haiku is absolutely completed even without this addition.
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Post by Mocha on Feb 5, 2018 23:12:27 GMT
Gonna make some meta-haiku for fun:
A meta haiku five, seven, five syllables that's how they all go
I hate all haiku with their strict syllable rules shit, I just made one
the Arktos BB discussions about all things including haiku
my fourth example does not contain that one word but is still meta
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Post by Elizabeth on Feb 6, 2018 0:58:47 GMT
I can't do haiku but only rhyming ones Shrug
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Post by Διαμονδ on Feb 6, 2018 9:10:48 GMT
I can't do haiku but only rhyming ones Learn at your leisure! We will see!
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Post by Deleted on Feb 6, 2018 13:13:07 GMT
Gonna make some meta-haiku for fun: A meta haiku five, seven, five syllables that's how they all go
I hate all haiku with their strict syllable rules shit, I just made one
the Arktos BB discussions about all things including haiku
my fourth example does not contain that one word but is still meta Perfecto! Perfecto! Mocha created some haiku. Damn! This coffee is hot!
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Post by Διαμονδ on Feb 6, 2018 13:55:52 GMT
I can't do haiku but only rhyming ones Queen and three aces! Three aces wrote a haiku! The Queen did not join them. She just only rhyming ones!
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Post by Deleted on Feb 6, 2018 16:14:41 GMT
A brilliant gift to the Queen, Cheeks shining red, Love come unexpactable!
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Post by Polaris on Feb 6, 2018 16:53:53 GMT
Haiku, Haiku.Haiku... Haiku, I like you....
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Post by Deleted on Feb 6, 2018 16:57:35 GMT
Arktos warm place, Hearts flame here, Love burn mountains.
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Post by Polaris on Feb 6, 2018 17:35:24 GMT
Arktos warm place, Hearts flame here, Love burn mountains. Arktos enlightening space, Minds flame here Love burn oceans
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Post by Deleted on Feb 6, 2018 22:04:31 GMT
Arktos warm place, Hearts flame here, Love burn mountains. Arktos enlightening space, Minds flame here Love burn oceans Arktos hearts love, Warm flames burn, Place here mountains.
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Post by Διαμονδ on Feb 6, 2018 22:07:24 GMT
Polaris - your poems is good !
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