shazou
Full Member
Posts: 231
Likes: 92
Meta-Ethnicity: Austronesian
Ethnicity: Filipino
Country: Philippines
Location: Makati
Ancestry: 1/2 North Ilocano 1/2 Central Luzonian
Taxonomy: Sudsinid-Protomalayid + residual Gracile Mediterranid
Y-DNA: C-M130
mtDNA: B4a1a3a
Politics: Apolitical
Relationship Status: Single
Hero: René Descartes
Age: 38
Philosophy: Cartesian
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Post by shazou on May 8, 2019 6:12:20 GMT
my very first ever poem to have actually ever tried..few days ago. Give me your honest opinion & general impressions etc...  |
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Post by Elizabeth on May 8, 2019 18:06:20 GMT
Before clickin',  I thought you'd be trippin.  But then came a wave of shock,  Wondering if you hid skills with a lock. The word usages and the fancy adjectives too, Makes me want to ask if this really came out of the blue. For that was truly well written for your first try, You should keep at it and might even get people to buy. Now....who is this "Great Beelzebub" you speak of? |
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